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I love to hear your voice
Lifting up my words;
Adding them to your music
Letting them be heard.

Pure light from my paper
Through your prism mind;
Let them be born a hue
To me your music binds.

Your music free is boundless
A sensation rarely found;
I feel blessed to behold it
And to have you around.

I wish you would envelop me
As your music does;
It wraps me in your life
It purely makes me buzz.
©2007-2009 ~grinningwolf
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Submitted: December 19, 2007
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Please bare in mind that this is my first non-school forced peotry, and also the first bit of poetry I've done in about a year. ^^;

I'd like constructive crit, but please be gentle :) Im quite proud of this, and it has a proper deep meaning to me.

*prods guitar boy at her school*
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Wow Moon. <3 Well done. Sorry, I'm not good at giving constructiv critisicm and I can't see anything that needs improving with this poem. *faves*

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Thanks to ~Nyaonoko for the avatar :heart:
thank you! :D

Haha, I got one of my guy friends to read this and he was like "well, this shows your inner thoughts and feelings, a poem of underlying feeling. Perhaps towards a certain musical...guitar playing boy who ignores you?" He said it in a really posh voice. XD I was just like "shut it!" because one of guitar boy's friends was walking past. X3

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Dawwww. <3

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Thanks to ~Nyaonoko for the avatar :heart:
hehe,
thought i'd pop in again and say

Kawaii! :3

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Waooow haha *prods school boy* :) its awesome

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